madimpossibledreamer

Main Points:
Persona 4 Sea of the Unconscious
Summary: Yosuke was not part of the original investigation team. In fact, he wasn't even part of their world. He was a huge fanboy. And then he fell into Inaba, and his life changed forever...
Really old, so not perfectly written, and it was during my FONTS EXIST phase. Slightly inspired by Chisotahn's Ten Steps fic. The entire concept is a little chuuni/Gary Stu. I don't think it would be bad with some tweaking, but that's tweaking i don't really want to do, so we've got this instead.
Aeon Yosuke continues to be awesome.  If hurt from the last adventure.  He also messes with the fourth wall in a meta way.  There's also summaries of the next couple floors, because I wasn't kidding about Hermit pretty much broke my creativity for this story.  There's also the end, which if you're hoping for a well-written ending, you're...not going to find it.  It's pretty much just the lead up to the revelation without the revelation, plus a little flirting.
Word Count: 1659
Rating: teen
also, this is the last alternative paths non-Buffy work I've got to post (yay!) and I've got a lot of Bloody Petals and other Buffy works I want to post, so that'll probably take this posting slot starting next week.  not last week.  i sadly have no time machine.

Main Points:
Persona 4 Sea of the Unconscious
Summary: Yosuke was not part of the original investigation team. In fact, he wasn't even part of their world. He was a huge fanboy. And then he fell into Inaba, and his life changed forever...
Really old, so not perfectly written, and it was during my FONTS EXIST phase. Slightly inspired by Chisotahn's Ten Steps fic. The entire concept is a little chuuni/Gary Stu. I don't think it would be bad with some tweaking, but that's tweaking i don't really want to do, so we've got this instead.
while yes, I could split this up, I don't see the point.  this is all associated with the same thing.  the thing that probably got me to lose any hope of finishing this thing well before I had qualms about its writing quality.  i got a little too ambitious, and this unfinished thing was the result.  the plan was to split up the entire party to go into their own game and play multiple levels.  I didn't even get written one level per character and it's already this long.
I was planning on getting a little more into Takuma and making him less unlikeable in this one (I think).  Like other Magicians he's supposed to be a little annoying, but the player's actually supposed to see that.  And maybe end up liking him anyway, but him being obnoxious is actually supposed to be seen as a fault, rather than just a "oh that Takuma" sort of thing.
There's also the issue that this "chapter" really doesn't advance the fic along, either.  It's a fun concept but, uh.  yeah.  It's not actually the end of this floor, but the actual plot-relevant stuff I separated out to the next part.
if you want a taste, but don't want to read the whole thing, just read the beginning as it has some fun portal-esque dialogue.
(...unrelated note but I don't remember using -kun for naoto in this fic. well done past!me)
(though also the past tense is a little weird)
Word Count: 5321
Rating: teen

 

( Part 12 )

 

oh yeah I forgot to mention this my thermometer was apparently off by enough degrees to make me panic because it was old (and also because I accidentally got water in places it shouldn't have been when I was cleaning it possibly)...so that's good.

Main Points:
Persona 4 Sea of the Unconscious
Summary: Yosuke was not part of the original investigation team. In fact, he wasn't even part of their world. He was a huge fanboy. And then he fell into Inaba, and his life changed forever...
Really old, so not perfectly written, and it was during my FONTS EXIST phase. Slightly inspired by Chisotahn's Ten Steps fic. The entire concept is a little chuuni/Gary Stu. I don't think it would be bad with some tweaking, but that's tweaking i don't really want to do, so we've got this instead.
Word Count: 2333
Rating: teen
Warning: This is, uh.  It means well.  It has better intentions than the ones writing the original Persona 4 (and the animation, and Golden), but it's still a little cringy and stereotypical.  Arguably that could be because it's a Shadow, but even then.  (Though some of the interactions between the different Shadows really do kind of show an internal struggle, so that part works.)  It's got some of my favorite lines in the entire fic, but.  (I guess it's a distillation of the best and worst parts of P4.  Of which there are some really high highs and some kind of disgusting lows.)  Thought I'd warn.  Also some outright homophobia from the new Magician Takuma.

 

( Part 9 )