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Sea of the Unconscious Part 9
Jul. 25th, 2020 09:07 pmoh yeah I forgot to mention this my thermometer was apparently off by enough degrees to make me panic because it was old (and also because I accidentally got water in places it shouldn't have been when I was cleaning it possibly)...so that's good.
Main Points:
Persona 4 Sea of the Unconscious
Summary: Yosuke was not part of the original investigation team. In fact, he wasn't even part of their world. He was a huge fanboy. And then he fell into Inaba, and his life changed forever...
Really old, so not perfectly written, and it was during my FONTS EXIST phase. Slightly inspired by Chisotahn's Ten Steps fic. The entire concept is a little chuuni/Gary Stu. I don't think it would be bad with some tweaking, but that's tweaking i don't really want to do, so we've got this instead.
Word Count: 2333
Rating: teen
Warning: This is, uh. It means well. It has better intentions than the ones writing the original Persona 4 (and the animation, and Golden), but it's still a little cringy and stereotypical. Arguably that could be because it's a Shadow, but even then. (Though some of the interactions between the different Shadows really do kind of show an internal struggle, so that part works.) It's got some of my favorite lines in the entire fic, but. (I guess it's a distillation of the best and worst parts of P4. Of which there are some really high highs and some kind of disgusting lows.) Thought I'd warn. Also some outright homophobia from the new Magician Takuma.
Main Points:
Persona 4 Sea of the Unconscious
Summary: Yosuke was not part of the original investigation team. In fact, he wasn't even part of their world. He was a huge fanboy. And then he fell into Inaba, and his life changed forever...
Really old, so not perfectly written, and it was during my FONTS EXIST phase. Slightly inspired by Chisotahn's Ten Steps fic. The entire concept is a little chuuni/Gary Stu. I don't think it would be bad with some tweaking, but that's tweaking i don't really want to do, so we've got this instead.
Word Count: 2333
Rating: teen
Warning: This is, uh. It means well. It has better intentions than the ones writing the original Persona 4 (and the animation, and Golden), but it's still a little cringy and stereotypical. Arguably that could be because it's a Shadow, but even then. (Though some of the interactions between the different Shadows really do kind of show an internal struggle, so that part works.) It's got some of my favorite lines in the entire fic, but. (I guess it's a distillation of the best and worst parts of P4. Of which there are some really high highs and some kind of disgusting lows.) Thought I'd warn. Also some outright homophobia from the new Magician Takuma.
( Part 9 )
