Souji Gets Mad

Aaaand this is where Souji started getting both mad at Yosuke and wondering if his heart really was in it.  He was generally mature, up until the point where he wasn't.  A thing that continued for a while.  Which is a thing that happens, yeah, but even discounting the difference between Social Links and things that actually happen on specific days, there's just a general inconsistency that nags at me.  You write plotlines with rising action and climaxes and stuff.  Yeah, personal foibles and all that, they're there to stay, and he won't just get better overnight, but that doesn't make a 'nearly pulled it off buuuuuuttttt....nope, not going to do it 100% for the sake of a cheap joke' writing style any easier to swallow.

10/20 Rumors about the fog being poison are beginning to spread.
Of course I came.  I didn’t…you shouldn’t have to go through this on your own.  Sobbing Seta.  That’s why.  :) Sorry.
…And Yosuke gets all mature and then the letter happens.  Sheesh.
…Thank you for being oblivious to my trembling knees, Nanako.  Actually, ignore me saying that, too.
Ah, and here comes the Yosuke ‘back off’ moment?
(as he panics.  Literally, that was the panicking emoticon.  Good.)
“It’s true.  I saw it on television.”
CATS.  We are agreed on that, Marie.
…nah, Kanji’s a punk.
PINK ALLIGATOR.
…even Nanako’s picking on Adachi.
Hana, you don’t want to be alone with me?
Video Room.
Well, Yosuke’s not the one that should be talking about it, persay, but…
Naoto’s worried about me.  Responsibilities.  So my Shadow thing makes sense.
Nanako gave me stickers to write back.
Rats.  Detective is smart.
…I’m kind of curious about how Yosuke did.
“just as happy as if I got the highest grade myself.”  Aww
As Yosuke and I stand there under the same umbrella.
Also I want to stand close to Yosuke.
“Dude, you should’ve mentioned you’re broke.”
…That was my reaction too, actually.  Perv.
No, Yosuke.  I’m not free for lunch.  Did you have something to tell me?
Souji was standing next to Yosuke, but then calmly walks away and sits down on the side, watching.
Naoto.  Why are you staring at Kanji?  Or are you just not looking at Yosuke?
…quickly look away from Naoto-kun.
Okay, you’ve got the honorific right, but you gotta work on your delivery, Yosuke.
And Rise’s the only one who’s disappointed that I said no?
RIIIISEE, KNOCK IT OFF!
Okay.  Now I’m starting to get mad.  Chie, leave me out of it.  I’m not that easily changeable.  When I say no, I mean no.  (everyone shocked at anger)
It’s believable, but…take some responsibility, Yosuke.
I’m less jealous than I am disappointed right now.
…We’re going to need to have a talk, too, Kanji.
Go get ‘em, Yosuke.  Be top banana.