Wild and Crazy Adventure
Jun. 26th, 2015 07:29 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
madimpossibledreamerWell, I got the true ending. And immediately started a NG+, because I am totally going to rock this. Among other things, I was getting so lonely giving all the goodbyes. I'm going to miss all these crazy peeps. Also, I figured out what was going on-I haven't had a migraine in too long, apparently. According to my body, anyway, which can be kind of jerkish at times. I'm feeling better today, if still a little shaky.
I got all the Personas in the compendium but: Lovers, Hermit, Fortune, Hanged Man, Death, Tower, and Moon max, plus Ardha. And yes, I know. I feel awful that I didn't finish Naoto's SL. Still, not bad for a first run.
Unfortunately, beta's still busy, but I can a) try to catch up with all the notes I made while playing the first go round, b) write a little more Persona, c) maybe play Persona 2 or Persona 3 some more, and d) watch the last episode of Jojo's. ORARARARARAA!!
And do the less fun stuff, but that can come later. Among other things, I have less access to the computers on the weekends, and I still have work, so. Luckily not on the weekends, but at times I wonder if it wouldn't be better to have the less fun stuff all on the same day so as to get it out of the way.
Also, I've been apparently writing too much dialogue. I'm using a lot of lingo that I don't normally use. /em shrug
Another note to make: I'm not entirely sure what all of the notes mean anymore...
"How'd you know I can't eat tofu? Wow, that's considerate of you." >Souji blushes.
...as both Kanji and Souji stare at Yosuke. (I assume when he was being an idiot talking to Rise.)
More Unbreakable Ties plotting that might or might not make it in:
Yosuke gets the impression that Souji likes Rise and will not stop going on about it. Souji actually snaps at him. Apologizes & waves it off as stress (& ignores the "if I'm bothering you tell me" thing)
Rise, meanwhile, figures it out (before she can start falling for Senpai, which is good). They become friends. -->Original conception, but won't allow for reaction to later behavior. I've yet to write the confrontation scene, but it will happen. and Rise will figure it out. Still be attracted, but deal better.
Souji for the first time in forever doesn't put Yosuke on the team because he knows Yosuke will worry more than the others at his cold fury that he's working out. Hesitantly, Chie asks "did you fight? He's not taking it very well."
"No, but..." Yosuke's determination to figure things out & fix them. Souji's touched that they're worried. -->I might actually go back to this, which would involve revision or plain throwing out of the old draft. I'd probably keep it up, but make a note and add a new tag or something.
Yosuke trusts the girls to know what they're doing.
Yosuke. Sit down.
...I am not eating the alarm clock.
...Rise, why are you being catty to Kanji?
...well, at least she's smart and knows science.
...that...fan looks creepy.
Wouldn't Teddie be attacked now that he has a Persona?
I've talked to him before, in the shopping district.
Yosuke does worry about Kanji.
If you're hot, Yosuke, I do have ice cubes.
Tohru Adachi Just Wants a Normal Life
(again and again) Yosuke-senpai was cool? No way! (shut up Rise)
Don't mess with the healer. She gets ticked off and crits (or Chie when Yukiko's there)
Aika thinks we're cool.
Chie knows Jeeves!
Cooking with Yosuke. /em blush
I'd smack her for flirting with Yosuke, but I can't quite reach...Yukiko?
Kanji. Why alcohol?
Nanako...there were pauses there that don't make me feel confident.
"You're smiling a lot. It's allowed if you're enjoying my art." -Daidara
"manly battle cries". Jojo, eh?
...I'M DATING YOSUKE NOW.
Souji knows what items are lucky. How.
with Ai "I'M NOT DATING HER YOSUKE."
>You feel kind of uneasy about having two guys in your room...
"Now I can stop seeing suspects in every shadow"...really, Dojima? Didn't know you were a punster. (pretty sure this was Dojima, not 100% though.)
Spacey girl reminds me of Haruhi.
I thought inviting Marie to the movies would be interesting.
Samegawa Riverbank is an important Social Link place.
Okay, ragging on Kanji has to stop. There's Yosuke, and Rise, and now Teddie? Seriously??
...he stayed at home because he was afraid of Rise.
Thank you, Kitsune.
I got all the Personas in the compendium but: Lovers, Hermit, Fortune, Hanged Man, Death, Tower, and Moon max, plus Ardha. And yes, I know. I feel awful that I didn't finish Naoto's SL. Still, not bad for a first run.
Unfortunately, beta's still busy, but I can a) try to catch up with all the notes I made while playing the first go round, b) write a little more Persona, c) maybe play Persona 2 or Persona 3 some more, and d) watch the last episode of Jojo's. ORARARARARAA!!
And do the less fun stuff, but that can come later. Among other things, I have less access to the computers on the weekends, and I still have work, so. Luckily not on the weekends, but at times I wonder if it wouldn't be better to have the less fun stuff all on the same day so as to get it out of the way.
Also, I've been apparently writing too much dialogue. I'm using a lot of lingo that I don't normally use. /em shrug
Another note to make: I'm not entirely sure what all of the notes mean anymore...
"How'd you know I can't eat tofu? Wow, that's considerate of you." >Souji blushes.
...as both Kanji and Souji stare at Yosuke. (I assume when he was being an idiot talking to Rise.)
More Unbreakable Ties plotting that might or might not make it in:
Yosuke gets the impression that Souji likes Rise and will not stop going on about it. Souji actually snaps at him. Apologizes & waves it off as stress (& ignores the "if I'm bothering you tell me" thing)
Rise, meanwhile, figures it out (before she can start falling for Senpai, which is good). They become friends. -->Original conception, but won't allow for reaction to later behavior. I've yet to write the confrontation scene, but it will happen. and Rise will figure it out. Still be attracted, but deal better.
Souji for the first time in forever doesn't put Yosuke on the team because he knows Yosuke will worry more than the others at his cold fury that he's working out. Hesitantly, Chie asks "did you fight? He's not taking it very well."
"No, but..." Yosuke's determination to figure things out & fix them. Souji's touched that they're worried. -->I might actually go back to this, which would involve revision or plain throwing out of the old draft. I'd probably keep it up, but make a note and add a new tag or something.
Yosuke trusts the girls to know what they're doing.
Yosuke. Sit down.
...I am not eating the alarm clock.
...Rise, why are you being catty to Kanji?
...well, at least she's smart and knows science.
...that...fan looks creepy.
Wouldn't Teddie be attacked now that he has a Persona?
I've talked to him before, in the shopping district.
Yosuke does worry about Kanji.
If you're hot, Yosuke, I do have ice cubes.
Tohru Adachi Just Wants a Normal Life
(again and again) Yosuke-senpai was cool? No way! (shut up Rise)
Don't mess with the healer. She gets ticked off and crits (or Chie when Yukiko's there)
Aika thinks we're cool.
Chie knows Jeeves!
Cooking with Yosuke. /em blush
I'd smack her for flirting with Yosuke, but I can't quite reach...Yukiko?
Kanji. Why alcohol?
Nanako...there were pauses there that don't make me feel confident.
"You're smiling a lot. It's allowed if you're enjoying my art." -Daidara
"manly battle cries". Jojo, eh?
...I'M DATING YOSUKE NOW.
Souji knows what items are lucky. How.
with Ai "I'M NOT DATING HER YOSUKE."
>You feel kind of uneasy about having two guys in your room...
"Now I can stop seeing suspects in every shadow"...really, Dojima? Didn't know you were a punster. (pretty sure this was Dojima, not 100% though.)
Spacey girl reminds me of Haruhi.
I thought inviting Marie to the movies would be interesting.
Samegawa Riverbank is an important Social Link place.
Okay, ragging on Kanji has to stop. There's Yosuke, and Rise, and now Teddie? Seriously??
...he stayed at home because he was afraid of Rise.
Thank you, Kitsune.
