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Sea of the Unconscious Part 4
Jun. 20th, 2020 11:44 amWell, that sucks.
So. A neighbor/friend of the family died (of cancer, not covid, and they weren't in pain probably). She was super nice, always willing to help out. One time when my cell phone died she drove me to meet my mom, since I couldn't call her and have her pick me up. Another time when us kids were on our own and stupidly locked ourselves out of the house she and her husband helped us get back inside rather than waiting out in freezing cold for a locksmith to come that we couldn't pay. Goodbye to a sweet old lady. We need more like her in times like these.
Main Points:
Persona 4 Sea of the Unconscious
Summary: Yosuke was not part of the original investigation team. In fact, he wasn't even part of their world. He was a huge fanboy. And then he fell into Inaba, and his life changed forever...
Really old, so not perfectly written, and it was during my FONTS EXIST phase. Slightly inspired by Chisotahn's Ten Steps fic. The entire concept is a little chuuni/Gary Stu. I don't think it would be bad with some tweaking, but that's tweaking i don't really want to do, so we've got this instead. This chapter has some decent dialogue and I think the imagery is really cool. If I was rewriting it today I think I'd just keep this floor (maybe with a bunch of different "mirror" stages if I was keeping the "yosuke is also fool" thing) and work in some of the lines from future parts because it has some of my favorite single by themselves lines.
(I cannot find the song I referred to so)
Word Count: 1416
Rating: teen
I use female pronouns for Naoto for this one. I like the more complex approach I use in the Average AU.
So. A neighbor/friend of the family died (of cancer, not covid, and they weren't in pain probably). She was super nice, always willing to help out. One time when my cell phone died she drove me to meet my mom, since I couldn't call her and have her pick me up. Another time when us kids were on our own and stupidly locked ourselves out of the house she and her husband helped us get back inside rather than waiting out in freezing cold for a locksmith to come that we couldn't pay. Goodbye to a sweet old lady. We need more like her in times like these.
Main Points:
Persona 4 Sea of the Unconscious
Summary: Yosuke was not part of the original investigation team. In fact, he wasn't even part of their world. He was a huge fanboy. And then he fell into Inaba, and his life changed forever...
Really old, so not perfectly written, and it was during my FONTS EXIST phase. Slightly inspired by Chisotahn's Ten Steps fic. The entire concept is a little chuuni/Gary Stu. I don't think it would be bad with some tweaking, but that's tweaking i don't really want to do, so we've got this instead. This chapter has some decent dialogue and I think the imagery is really cool. If I was rewriting it today I think I'd just keep this floor (maybe with a bunch of different "mirror" stages if I was keeping the "yosuke is also fool" thing) and work in some of the lines from future parts because it has some of my favorite single by themselves lines.
(I cannot find the song I referred to so)
Word Count: 1416
Rating: teen
I use female pronouns for Naoto for this one. I like the more complex approach I use in the Average AU.
( part 4 )
